时间:2019-01-08 作者:英语课 分类:托福英语


英语课

   建议一: 避免空洞的单词和词组


  1. 在托福写作中,一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:
  When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
  这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:
  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
  2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:
  Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation 1 to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
  “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:
  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
  建议二: 避免重复
  1. 在托福写作中,尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:
  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
  large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:
  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
  更简洁的表达方式为:
  My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
  2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:
  My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
  这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly 2,显得更为简洁:
  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

n.(法律、道德上的)义务,责任
  • Every player is under an obligation to keep the rules.每个选手都必须遵守这些规则。
  • It is the obligation of citizens to perform military service.服兵役是每个公民的义务。
adv.重复地,再三地
  • The loudspeakers blared the speech repeatedly.扬声器里反复大声地播送那篇演讲。
  • He repeatedly beat his foot upon the floor.他反复用脚敲着地板。
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