时间:2018-12-01 作者:英语课 分类:新东方BEC中级写作


英语课

 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships. Use specific details and examples to support your opinion. 朋友之间的竞争对于友谊有消极影响,是否认同?(2016年7月2日)


  【头脑风暴】 江湖中,一个高手打遍天下无敌手的时候,也就是他的武功即将废掉的时候。竞争对手亦可为友,因为彼此的敬重和欣赏。
  【写作立场】 朋友之间的竞争有助于增进友谊,维持友情。
  【思路拓展】
  为何朋友之间的竞争有利于维持友谊:
  友谊是建立在互相尊敬和欣赏的基础之上的,所谓英雄相惜,因此,只有通过竞争, 我们才能发现朋友的优点,进而产生一种敬意。和优秀的人在一起也是人的一种本能。所以,竞争有助于增进友谊。
  这个争议是我想起一个体育故事,NBA 球星James 和 Paul 是一对好友,他们在比赛中互不相让,为了各自的团队荣誉而战,但是,在生活中他们是好友,甚至亲人,他们因为彼此欣赏,互相帮助, 他们的友谊并没有因为竞争而淡化。
  为何朋友之间的竞争不利于维持友谊:
  衡量友谊的一个很重要的标准就是朋友在患难或者危机时刻的表现。生活中例证很多,很多人是玩耍的好伙伴,但是,一旦遇到竞争,尤其是涉及到个人利益的竞争,如果一方为自我的私利而做出有损于友谊的事情,这时候,友谊很难维持。
  但是,我想反驳的是:为了个人的利益就可以在竞争中卖友求荣,损人利己之人,不值得结交。
  【经典语料】
  1.Sincere friendship is what every individual aspires 1 after. 真诚的友谊是人人渴求的。
  2.However, people differ greatly in their views as to whether or not true friendship can withstand the test of competition. 然而,关于是否真正的友谊是否可以经受住竞争的考验,人们的观点各异。
  3.As I see it,competition can be a promoter of friendship rather than a barrier for interpersonal relationship. 我认为,竞争可以促进友谊,而不是人际关系的阻碍。
  4.As a proverb goes, excellent people usually appreciate each other. Hence, true friendship should be based on mutual 2 respect and appreciation 3. 友谊是建立在互相尊敬和欣赏的基础之上的,所谓英雄相惜。
  5.Only by means of competing with friends, can we find the personal strength of our friends, naturally, respect grows. After all, such is human nature to stick with elite 4 people. 只有通过竞争, 我们才能发现朋友的优点,进而产生一种敬意,因为和优秀的人在一起也是人的一种本能。
  6.This debate reminds me of a story. 这个争议是我想起来一个体育故事。
  7.James and Paul are noted 5 for their basketball talents and skills on the NBA court, during the basketball game, they compete with each other fiercely for the honor of respective team.  However, competition never alienate 6 their friendship, they are close friends in real life for the simple reason that they appreciate each other. 球星James 和 Paul 是一对好朋友,他们在比赛中互不相让,为了各自的团队荣誉而战,但是,在生活中他们是好友,他们因为彼此欣赏,才结为朋友,友谊没有因为竞争而淡化。
  8.One's reaction in time of hardship or crisis, in the eyes of the vast majority of people, will be one of the most crucial criteria 7 to evaluate friendship. 衡量友谊的一个很重要的标准就是朋友在患难或者危机时刻的表现。
  9.From our life, we can find plenty of evidence to prove that many people are just good playmates, however, it is extremely hard for them to maintain friendship if personal interests are involved, especially when a person intentionally 8 sell friends out. In this case, competition might make two people go from being best friends to bitter rivals. 生活中例证很多,很多人是玩耍的好伙伴,但是,一旦遇到竞争,尤其是涉及到个人利益的竞争,如果一方为自我的私利而做出有损于友谊的事情,这时,友谊很难维持。
  10.What I want to rebut 9, however, is that those who do things for personal profit at another's expense in the hot competition are never trustworthy friends. 但是,我想反驳的是:为了个人的利益就可以在竞争中卖友求荣,损人利己的人,不值得结交。

1 aspires
v.渴望,追求( aspire的第三人称单数 )
  • The fame to which he aspires was beyond his reach. 他追求的名誉乃是他所不能及的。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • An old steed in the stable still aspires to gallop a thousand li. 老骥伏枥,志在千里。 来自《简明英汉词典》
2 mutual
adj.相互的,彼此的;共同的,共有的
  • We must pull together for mutual interest.我们必须为相互的利益而通力合作。
  • Mutual interests tied us together.相互的利害关系把我们联系在一起。
3 appreciation
n.评价;欣赏;感谢;领会,理解;价格上涨
  • I would like to express my appreciation and thanks to you all.我想对你们所有人表达我的感激和谢意。
  • I'll be sending them a donation in appreciation of their help.我将送给他们一笔捐款以感谢他们的帮助。
4 elite
n.精英阶层;实力集团;adj.杰出的,卓越的
  • The power elite inside the government is controlling foreign policy.政府内部的一群握有实权的精英控制着对外政策。
  • We have a political elite in this country.我们国家有一群政治精英。
5 noted
adj.著名的,知名的
  • The local hotel is noted for its good table.当地的那家酒店以餐食精美而著称。
  • Jim is noted for arriving late for work.吉姆上班迟到出了名。
6 alienate
vt.使疏远,离间;转让(财产等)
  • His attempts to alienate the two friends failed because they had complete faith.他离间那两个朋友的企图失败了,因为他们彼此完全信任。
  • We'd better not alienate ourselves from the colleagues.我们最好还是不要与同事们疏远。
7 criteria
n.标准
  • The main criterion is value for money.主要的标准是钱要用得划算。
  • There are strict criteria for inclusion in the competition.参赛的标准很严格。
8 intentionally
ad.故意地,有意地
  • I didn't say it intentionally. 我是无心说的。
  • The local authority ruled that he had made himself intentionally homeless and was therefore not entitled to be rehoused. 当地政府裁定他是有意居无定所,因此没有资格再获得提供住房。
9 rebut
v.辩驳,驳回
  • He attempted to rebut the assertions made by the prosecution witness.他试图反驳控方证人所作的断言。
  • This open letter is to rebut the argument of abstractionism.这封公开信是反驳抽象派论点的。
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